gets tiring after a bit, that voice gets tiring.
hmm, an interesting undertaking for sure, though I must state that the voice you used at was a rather detrimental idea for the song. Especially that synth that accompanied it. By itself this loops speaks of being useful for a light ice level, sparkling waters is what I get from the first 6 seconds, and then morphs as it moves.
That voice gets irratating after the 4-5th listen. This loop would not do well for 10-15 minutes of gameplay.
I see you've brought that flute back in 0:08-0:15. As it did in the last song, it provided an excellent boost to the song here. Though be wary of how and where you use that flute, it does not work for all occasions.
The loop ends a tad abruptly, though again it is acceptable in looping means.
In any case, good luck with the contest! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!