Slick
I tried to see what the first reviewer said. And listened closely, but I didn't find anything irratating, or wrong with this song.
maybe he just... really... really doesn't like dissonance?
The melodic work itself is qutie spectacular in my opinion. The song flows well and the structure holds throughout.
I don't rightly know how to critique a piece like this. You see i'm not that knowledgable about Music Theory, but I know a good piece when I hear one, and I really liked this one.
I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime Garagebandabuse! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!