Slick!
hmm, I love this song. It's just a brilliant track and carries so much passion with it.
My first thought were directed at those bells. I didn't quite like them to be honest. It seemed like you added them on top of the original melody and they disrupted the flow of the song.
When the choirs started coming in, I was instantly reconsidering.
I really liked it when the choirs came in, you did good work with them, truly added layers upon layers to the piece.
In fact, I would say the bells actually helps at this point. You need to listen to them for a bit, get used to them, but well worth it after the adjustement.
The ending choir note was held for far too long. I realize the song builds up to a finish, but in my opinon, far too long. I would have liked too see the choir dim down to silence, and either sing along with the buildup end, or simply let the build up end arrive and finish it off.
All in all, a rather well made track! I would like to invite you to check out my work sometime djt820! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!